1. The tomatoes at this fruit stand are much more plumps, fresh and tasty than the fruit stand located in the lobby of the building in which I work. Much more plump, fresh and tasty than those sold at the fruit stand located in the lobby of the building.

 

点评：这个句子中比较了多个项目。在多个比较中可以用“much more/less adj+adj+adj+...”的形式。

同时注意比较的对象(西红柿和西红柿比)。

 

2. Although we were opposed to the program, we thought that despite its bilateral support, it would accomplish a little. We opposed the program, despite its bilateral support, because we thought it would accomplish little.

 

点评：句子原意为“尽管该计划如何如何好，我们反对它，因为。。。。。。”先弄清句意。表原因还是用更简单的“because”。

 

3. The U tiger, a relative of the B tiger, has been described as the strongest tiger and also the most peaceful of them. U the strongest and yet the most peaceful of tigers.

 

点评：和前面一题类似。

 

4. While several baseball teams have tried to supplant the Yankees as the dominant team in baseball, their inability has been unable to win even half as many WS as the Yankees have won in the past one hundred years. they have been unable CUUS -- Chinese Undergraduates in the United States

 

点评：平行结构，时态，句式一致。CUUS -- Chinese Undergraduates in the United States

 

5. If we compare the number of alligators with the Gila monsters over time, we see that the alligator is in decline. A comparison overtime of the numbers of alligators and Gila monsters shows that alligators are

 

点评：直接用“comparison”更简洁。同时还是要(老问题了)注意比较的对象。数量必须和数量比。

 

6. The price of gold has been influenced by continued inflation and because people have lost faith in the dollar. Loss of faith

 

点评：平行结构。