雅思口语高分需要与众不同
2015-01-23 14:17 | 编辑:川外外语培训中心 来自:未知导读:这是场言语考试。所以最重要的是你要在言语才能和主意上体现得异乎寻常,甚至是你对论题的解读要异乎寻常。 下面咱们来看一个第二有些的考生典范,该论题的题目是:A Friend of Yours,论题卡上的描绘是:You should say who this friend is, how you met, w
这是场言语考试。所以最重要的是你要在言语才能和主意上体现得异乎寻常,甚至是你对论题的解读要异乎寻常。
下面咱们来看一个第二有些的考生典范,该论题的题目是:A Friend of Yours,论题卡上的描绘是:You should say who this friend is, how you met, what you do together and why this friend is important to you.
该考生在卡片上写下了下面三个词:
Macy
not aggressive
trust
Actually, the friend I want to talk about is a sheep, called Macy. Not a real sheep, she’s a toy, a fluffy toy, you know, about this big. Macy and I met about two years ago, in a shop, the day I broke up with my boyfriend. So I bought her… She was so cute, and I needed somebody to talk to, somebody soft, somebody I could trust. So Macy entered my life… yay! Actually, I call her Macy. It’s her English name, cos at that time I had just started studying fashion and I really admired a designer from South China called Ma Ke. It sounds a bit like Macy.
What do we do together? We just hang out, especially in the evening. We listen to music together. I tell her about what happened to me during the day. I tell her my secrets, and she listens. She’s a great listener, you know, and sometimes I put my head on her, like a pillow, and she’s very soft and warm and she never complains. Not like my ex-boyfriend! Macy is much more patient and mature!
Yeah, Macy is really important to me… I remember one time, when I was visiting my aunt in Wuxi, I left her behind when I took the train back to Shanghai. I really missed her! I had to call my aunt, and wait a week before my uncle came to Shanghai and gave her back. Ummm, also Macy is very fashionable. You know, she’s a Yang, like people born in the Year of the Sheep, so that means she’s quiet, and elegant, and also Yang people try very hard not to you’re your feelings. Just like me, they need to feel loved and protected! They’re maybe not very good about big decisions – not about love anyway – but actually deep down they are very passionate!
考官点评:
考官听到这样的答复可能会惊奇,但更多的是惊喜。该考生具有描绘梦想的言语。
语法: 不只用了一般现在时和一般曩昔时, 也用了曩昔完成时(I had just started)、曩昔进行时(I was visiting)。另外,还用了情态动词(somebody I could trust)和动名词(studying fashion)。
语法精确性:很精确。两分钟内没有呈现一个语法错误。
词汇:用词丰厚、精确,用了许多形容词, 如fluffy, mature, patient, elegant, fashionable和passionate;还用了一些动词短语, 如I broke up with my boyfriend 和leave something behind。介词和名词的用法也都准确。
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